Watch Your Pronouns – Sentence Correction Tip 1
This is the first of a few tips in which we’ll be going over pronouns. A pronoun (he, she, we, it…) must have a uniquely determined antecedent. That is, there must be a noun of the same number and gender in the same sentence for it to refer back to. If there is no such noun, or if there is more than one such noun, the pronoun is being used incorrectly.
When Correcting Sentences or finding Sentence Errors, be on the lookout for ambiguous pronouns; that is, a pronoun that does not clearly match with a specific antecedent.
Take a look at the following illustrations:
Gerald, Matilda, and Nicole were dining when, choking on a bone, she toppled off the kitchen chair.
Well, who fell off the kitchen chair? We can surmise it was either Matilda or Nicole since the pronoun “she” is female, but we have no means of determining which of the two fell. A better written sentence might look something like this—
Gerald, Matilda, and Nicole were dining when Nicole toppled off the kitchen chair after choking on a bone.
Now we can clearly identify that it was Nicole who was so unfortunate. In addition to the ambiguous case of “whodunit,” in which you must choose between multiple people, there is also the case of “whichdunit,” where it is impossible to tell whether the pronoun refers back to people or objects. For example:
It is difficult for many young people to understand that citizens were once not allowed to read certain books, but they have since become available.
Since ‘they’ could refer back to ‘books,’ ‘citizens,’ or ‘people,’ it is ambiguous. The sentence should either be rewritten with a specific noun in place of the pronoun, or it should employ “which” or “that” (not allowed to read certain books which have since become available).
A pronoun must have exactly one antecedent of the same number and gender as itself. If it has more than one, it becomes ambiguous and therefore erroneous.
QUICK TIP: Watch for sentences that have multiple subjects and nouns but only one pronoun.





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